jueves, 15 de octubre de 2015

Peer response from Eva Galbis Belmonte to Ahlam.

Dear Ahlam, I think your relationship with you mother is beautifull and very close because you tell her everything about you and that is very personal. Maybe you can improve your text by saying something you don't like about her, you can say something she does that annoys you. That way, your text has the things you don't like about her and it is more complete.

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